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name: naqaashi
email: riddhima_t@yahoo.com
comment: .....hmm....well, nice introspection on Rai. it's not often mentioned, but in the manhua, his face seems to get a little melancholy everytime something bad happens and he sees more evil. :) I like it...Rai the altruist. Though he'd probably say it's because he can't stand to live in a dirty, bad world. XD
 
Name: Velvy
Review: I like it. Its a different take on the advancements in technology, and though the eyes of someone who isn't constantly 'looking forward' without looking
around. I also like how its focused primarily on his since of smell, and how
he can tell that much about the world from just his first few breaths.


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